ext_85960 ([identity profile] pride-of-erin.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2005-08-08 06:46 am (UTC)

Squee! Great to see you here, Mav! I loved, loved, loved this! You get the interactions between these two *so* right with your characterizations and dialogue - and your love for these characters comes through so well in your writing.

There were a few things that I especially loved:

***If you were on a mission to get laid tonight, why in God’s name did you call me?”*** - this was soooo perfect. And it could be innocent, but I like to think of it as Rodney being oblivious to the Colonel's intentions *bg*

***“You want to diddle for middle?”*** - snerk, I had a similar reaction to Rodney when I read this!

***“It’s the simple pleasures you know. I mean I drank an entire container of milk directly from the carton in the grocery store last night.”*** - oh God, so very Rodney *g*

And I loved Rodney telling John he had faith in him. And for some reason I got a kick out of the color-coordinated darts. :)

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