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2005-09-07 01:57 am (UTC)
I'm stealing bibliokat's line
I make editing comments because I love:
[this line is a tense change] -- John has always been far too pretty for Rodney's own good.
The stupid[ity] of undergrads might kill me."
Ooh, there is so much here I love. Especially:
He was at John's door by 6:15, the first time he'd been early for anything in almost ten years. -- Loved this!
"Aren't you supposed to, I don't know, not ask questions like that?" -- Perfect!
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I'm stealing bibliokat's line
Ooh, there is so much here I love. Especially:
He was at John's door by 6:15, the first time he'd been early for anything in almost ten years. -- Loved this!
"Aren't you supposed to, I don't know, not ask questions like that?" -- Perfect!