ext_7873 ([identity profile] taverymate.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2005-10-14 07:57 am (UTC)

Very nicely done. Spotted a typo, though, in the following sentence.

That's why they were fat at the first place.

At should be in.

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