ext_21794 ([identity profile] wildmachinery.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2005-03-13 06:57 am (UTC)

Loved the bookends bit, and

"And also," John whispered into his ear, "Ford is laughing at us."

Rodney scrambled to his knees and looked down at John in horror, then followed his gaze to the glass doors leading into the darkened interior. There was...no one there. He blinked, then looked down at John again, frowning.

"Made you look." John's grin was all smug satisfaction.


Hee! They're such little boys. This was absolute greatness. Thank you.

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