ext_975: photo of a woof (excited)
ext_975 ([identity profile] springwoof.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2006-03-02 07:33 am (UTC)

Dude!

Because of course this fic has more cool lines than you can shake a stick at, including:

"The ZPM," Rodney interrupted. "Your power source. How depleted is it?"

Kartus looked confused. "Which one?"

"Dude!" Rodney said, and hugged him.


Hee!

And of course, your characterization is awesome (how poignant was it that Rodney was all amazed that people had nice things to say about him? jeez), and the action scenes are thrilling (Giant. Fucking. Snakes.), and the sex is hot (the kissing scenes alone--whew! ::fans self::). But, wow, the pacing -- this story just wouldn't let me stop reading it. It felt like falling off the side of a cliff or getting strapped into some wild ride--no way off but through.

Woo Hoo! It was fun! Awesome! Thanks.

wags, springwoof

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