ext_1086 ([identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic2006-03-04 12:37 am

"Wait" by Kellifer_fic - Left Behind Challenge

Title: Wait
Author: [livejournal.com profile] kellifer_fic
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Sheppard/McKay
Challenge: "Left Behind"
Note: Thanks to *superfox* for the beta.
Words: 199

Summary: Rodney tends to be first, in all things.



He was whispering, “Wait for me, God, wait for me, McKay,” in such a low dirty voice that Rodney, if he’d been more coherent, would have said that it wasn’t helping matters. He also would have pointed out that he had been waiting for John for nearly a year and a half.

Then he was coming, harder than he had in a long time.

Rodney came to five seconds later to John insistently flicking him on the forehead.

“I can’t believe you did that. You do not get to come first and then pass out.” John looked pointedly down at his still impressively hard appendage.

“I didn’t mean to. You were just… and that thing you were doing… I’m only human you know!”

“Leave no man behind, Rodney. How many times do I have to say that?” John demanded, but his tone was teasing.

“I’ll get you the next time,” Rodney said with an airy wave of the hand, smirking when John scowled at him.

"I really hate you McKay."

Rodney slowly reached between their bodies and his broad hand gripped John’s cock, thumb circling slowly over the tip.

"You what me?"

"I... nguhhsheeahhh..."

"See, that's what I thought."

[identity profile] morena-donn.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 01:58 pm (UTC)(link)
*hee* What a way to start the morning!

[identity profile] lavvyan.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
heh. this is so very cool. *snicker*

wait

[identity profile] laceymcbain.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 03:39 pm (UTC)(link)
“Leave no man behind, Rodney. How many times do I have to say that?”

*snort* For such a short piece, this was fantastic. *g*

[identity profile] rasmizar.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
*lol* I like your interpretation of the challenge... =)

[identity profile] looking4tarzan.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Rodney is an evil man

[identity profile] ncvids.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee hee. Hee hee hee hee hee hee hee.
zellieh: kitten looking shocked, openmouthed, text: WTF? (What the fuck?) (Default)

[personal profile] zellieh 2006-03-03 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
"I... nguhhsheeahhh..." - best line ever! Bwahahahaha!

[identity profile] jo-zed-pee-em.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 09:50 pm (UTC)(link)
*falls off bed* Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe!

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 11:23 pm (UTC)(link)
heeeee lol Great fic!

[identity profile] burntcopper.livejournal.com 2006-03-04 12:34 am (UTC)(link)
:snerrrrrrk:

I needed that.

[identity profile] chaps1870.livejournal.com 2006-03-04 02:35 am (UTC)(link)
Too wicked...Loved it!

[identity profile] sffan.livejournal.com 2006-03-04 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Hee. This is so fucking them

Literally. And figuratively.

:P

[identity profile] kuwdora.livejournal.com 2006-03-04 05:32 am (UTC)(link)

Bwaaaahaaaa

[identity profile] wagacca.livejournal.com 2006-03-04 05:44 am (UTC)(link)
Best way to take that challenge. I love lateral thinking!

[identity profile] trill100.livejournal.com 2006-03-04 07:15 am (UTC)(link)
Oh man, that was great. I made the mistake a reading it right before heading to work tonight, and I couldn't stop giggling for like an hour.

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2006-03-04 07:19 am (UTC)(link)
heee Feel free to snag. The credits are in the icon description. :D

[identity profile] hinokumo.livejournal.com 2006-03-05 01:53 pm (UTC)(link)
*big happy grin* Oh yeah :D

Also, I LOVE your icon! <3<3 Any chance I can grab and credit?

[identity profile] ardent-muses.livejournal.com 2006-03-06 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh. You packed the good stuff into this little piece. Very nice. :)

[identity profile] hinokumo.livejournal.com 2006-03-06 07:22 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much!

[identity profile] hinokumo.livejournal.com 2006-03-06 07:25 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmm. Thanks again! She does have lovely lovely SGA things *HG*
spikedluv: (mcshep_partofme_chelle)

[personal profile] spikedluv 2006-03-06 10:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Really love your take on the challenge. *vbg*
ext_948: (McShep?? by empty_ambition)

[identity profile] from-the-corner.livejournal.com 2006-03-06 11:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yeah, go Rodney!
Ekhem, sorry... :D

[identity profile] bluebrocade.livejournal.com 2006-03-10 05:50 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! Excellent take on the challenge.

[identity profile] kuonji14.livejournal.com 2006-03-20 10:36 am (UTC)(link)
lol, that's a... creative interpretation.

[identity profile] lishel_fracrium.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 05:54 am (UTC)(link)
*cackles* they are so cute! and perfect! loved this.