ext_1832 ([identity profile] sffan.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2006-03-20 11:22 am (UTC)

This is good.

Constructive criticism: there needs to be more! *g* It's a good short piece, but I think it could be the beginning of a really good longer piece. And I'm not just saying that because I want more sex. Honest.

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