And no, you did not imagine the convo we had; I'll send it to you. Anny Bertel was not part of the first draft. I added the cat b/c of something you said and then the story languished until my frantic last-minute close-edit last night so I completely forgot to gloat to you and to thank you for the idea.
The story's still not as 'tight' as I would like, but I think (in my oh so humble opinion, g) that it's improved quite a bit.
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Wow that sounds so wrong out of context, lol.
And no, you did not imagine the convo we had; I'll send it to you. Anny Bertel was not part of the first draft. I added the cat b/c of something you said and then the story languished until my frantic last-minute close-edit last night so I completely forgot to gloat to you and to thank you for the idea.
The story's still not as 'tight' as I would like, but I think (in my oh so humble opinion, g) that it's improved quite a bit.
TTYL!