I like the first half a lot. So many nice little touches too. But the second half was really hard to follow. I finished up not understanding what I had read, which is always an unpleasant feeling. So I wasn't going to comment at all. But then you did ask, and that reminded me that I really did like the first half.
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I like the first half a lot. So many nice little touches too. But the second half was really hard to follow. I finished up not understanding what I had read, which is always an unpleasant feeling. So I wasn't going to comment at all. But then you did ask, and that reminded me that I really did like the first half.