Just so it's plain, I don't dislike this fic at all. I think it's highly realistic, in-character and pretty damn hot. It's John's pissiness and irritation over both Weir and McKay being, you know, autonomic, that make me want to slap him. But you've written John with self-awareness and knowledge of exactly what he's doing and why so, I mean, he's still John and I can see how things might go from here. He's just, as you said, not at his finest.