ext_841: (john 3 (by liviapenn))
ext_841 ([identity profile] cathexys.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2006-06-01 06:53 pm (UTC)

omg...leave it to you to take a difficult concept (how to get folks in their thirties to still be virgins) and turn it on its head. i loved the making him a virgin again moment only to sdquee in delight about all the others not *needing* it!!!

and the john/rodney scene was marvelous, the best i love you i think i've ever read, hostile, annoyed, both in giving and receiving...

i loved the style you chose here, all lush and beautiful and your language is like the currents that are dragging john along...

thank you!!!

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