ext_1599 ([identity profile] mutecornett.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2006-06-02 09:29 pm (UTC)

D'oh, I meant physically erase his prior sexual experiences to make him a virgin. See, not making sense. :) I mostly like that you made it about John being emotionally a virgin, I guess, rather than *physically* one--I mean, it sounds weirdly simple when I put it that way but it's more complex in a way I can't really figure out. Um. I just really liked it.

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