ext_41178 ([identity profile] anneten.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2006-07-04 05:35 pm (UTC)

Oh, this was fantastic!

I love how you captured the whole family dynamic that exists between the members of the Expedition. Their voices all ring true.

And the image of Ronon in Disneyworld? Sort of surreal but ultimately hilarious. D'you think that he still had knives in his hair? If so then the Goofy incident gets slightly dark (but not less funny). And I think there's the possibility he could be confused with someone from the cast of "Pirates of the Carribean"...

A hoot. Well done!

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