ext_1438 ([identity profile] mecurtin.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2006-07-10 01:53 pm (UTC)

A man -- about as tall as John but broader along the shoulders -- ran down two steps at a time, and was out the door with a swirl of his trenchcoat.

"Ponytails," sniffed Rodney


This was the point where I started to squeal with glee.

The biggest problem I have with the story is that it is too short -- I'm not sure how comprehensible it will be to SGA fans who don't have a HL background. Also, whose Quickening did Duncan take? Sure looks like my boyfriend Methos at the end there, so it's not *him*. I am deeply disappointed at not having an extended scene between Methos & McKay, too -- I love that sort of thing (http://mecurtin.livejournal.com/288088.html).

Maybe I have to re-read it when I'm not so groggy to make sure it all makes sense to me.

The Joe-John connection is *gold*, and I shall adopt as my fanon whenever needed.

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