Really good take on the challenge. I like how Rodney has changed and not changed in Pegasus. He know what he needs to do, knows how to do it, does it, but still reacts to it and still tries to avoid it.

I can really *hear* Rodney in this line, "So, yes, you know. Hero here. Always ready to kill the bad guys, save the day—" by the way. Nice voice even if you don't have a lot of dialogue.

One little typo, though: Complementary should be complimentary, with an i.