Your prose is simply amazing. This story is very foward and provacative mainly due to the thought you've put into it. I'm very creeped out and loved the characterizations in this. You do this challenge justice!
When Teyla regained consciousness, she found herself staring at a canopy of leafy green. One tree, branches elegant, old and covered in leaves reminiscent of the shape of Atlantis.
That's really what hooked me on your story. I close my eyse, and I'm there. There are often stories where I'll read and enjoy them but never be there in the moment but here I am.
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Your prose is simply amazing. This story is very foward and provacative mainly due to the thought you've put into it. I'm very creeped out and loved the characterizations in this. You do this challenge justice!
When Teyla regained consciousness, she found herself staring at a canopy of leafy green. One tree, branches elegant, old and covered in leaves reminiscent of the shape of Atlantis.
That's really what hooked me on your story. I close my eyse, and I'm there. There are often stories where I'll read and enjoy them but never be there in the moment but here I am.