adina-atl.livejournal.com ([identity profile] adina-atl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic2006-07-27 12:19 am

Bootless by Adina_Atl (Darkside challenge)

Author: Adina_Atl
Title: Bootless
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Major Sheppard
Word Count: 100
Summary: Before the Daedalus there was no resupply.
Disclaimer: Not mine, don't own them or get money from them.
Warnings: None



A pair of boots is irreplaceable.

So is a man, but you can't think about that lest you come to care too much--or too little. Too much and you are paralyzed with fear, with loss. Too little and people won't trust you, won't follow where you lead. Once there was another reason to care, but you can't remember what.

Dry-eyed you watch the mortuary assistants strip the body you brought back through the wormhole. Boots. Holster. Tattered shirt, rent by the Wraith's long talons. Even the underwear will be passed along.

Boots, size ten, made in another galaxy. Irreplaceable.
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[identity profile] almightychrissy.livejournal.com 2006-07-27 04:25 am (UTC)(link)
Out of curiosity, was this inspired by All Quiet on the Western Front? It called up many of those images to me.

Very sad and matter of fact and effective.
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[personal profile] tidal_race 2006-07-27 04:27 am (UTC)(link)
Stark reality, stark writing, great drabble.

[identity profile] kuwdora.livejournal.com 2006-07-27 05:34 am (UTC)(link)

Wow.

[identity profile] cupidsbow.livejournal.com 2006-07-27 05:35 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I really like that. Thank you.

[identity profile] thepouncer.livejournal.com 2006-07-27 06:56 am (UTC)(link)
So evocative of their first year in Atlantis.
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[identity profile] monanotlisa.livejournal.com 2006-07-27 09:16 am (UTC)(link)
Great, great drabble! Thank you.

[identity profile] bruinsfan.livejournal.com 2006-07-27 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I would have killed to see Sheppard going on a mission in a borrowed "Mr. Fantastic" T-shirt toward the end of Season 1 due to all his uniform togs having been shredded.

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2006-07-28 12:57 am (UTC)(link)
Nicely done.

[identity profile] burntcopper.livejournal.com 2006-07-31 02:02 pm (UTC)(link)
nice one. I'm also hoping for his nicking the Mr Fantastic t-shirt.

[identity profile] hajimebassaidai.livejournal.com 2010-06-24 08:27 pm (UTC)(link)
The horrible practicality of it is chilling.

But it rings with reality.