ext_19541 ([identity profile] black-eyedgirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2006-08-10 02:47 am (UTC)

Sometimes it's great to find a fic that just makes you *happy* :-)

I love how you balanced out the problems with the power (the overpowering-ness, not being able to eat or drink *coffee*) with the helpful stuff (being able to find death!devices, boy!sex). It's just a really cool, funny, exploration of all that.

that Sheppard looked amused and smelled startled and still sleepless Made me go 'oh', because it's so John to cover it up with a smirk but actually be concerned. (And very tired). He's so contradictory. Also, of course, the invisible puddle-jumper exchange. ;-)

Rodney had snorted at that, but no matter how hard he tried, he never could smell any on John; “what’re you doing?” John squeaked a minute later, and Rodney dug his nose in harder, licking for good measure. “I have to check all your hair,” Rodney’d explained, and John had snorted – sometimes they took turns –
*g* I love John/Rodney snark.

And the last few lines are sweet, and hot, and hopeful in the way only Rodney is. As you might be able to tell, I liked this a lot!

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