ext_16465 ([identity profile] jazmin22.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2006-08-10 05:55 pm (UTC)

SECOND POWER=MURPHY'S LAW.
"Isn't that already your superpower?" Rodney smirked.


Absolutely Brilliant!

The whole part where we see Sg-1, Vala, Harriman, and the soilders was beautiful. I love how Sam can't read it's so funny. This line is also a really nicely description:

Daniel had his head down on the countertop and his shoulders shook with muffled laughter.

I was able to picture this whole thing with the actors doing thing as you described, Sheppard bouncing and acting excited like little kid was a really cute!

In conclusion- LOVED IT!

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