http://hajimebassaidai.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] hajimebassaidai.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2010-06-21 10:46 pm (UTC)

Was a tad concerned by the summary but thought I give it a go! Glad I did!

The detachment from knowing what is going on, starting with "roasted bird meat", provided by Ronon's perspective makes for an incredibly interesting fic.

Loved Rodney's indignation, ""I'm not the team whore,"...He stopped eating and threw down his fork, which, if Ronon judged by what he knew of McKay so far was correct, was as upset as he could get.", which is perfectly done but that he continues to strive to explain things to Ronon.

I liked the puzzlement of the warrior as to why the scientists did what they did and why the expedition had the focus it had.

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