ext_1460 ([identity profile] iamrighthere.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2007-01-06 05:54 am (UTC)

"He sits up in bed, the clack of sticks still ringing in his head."

Beautiful detail.

Really spot-on. John would be as subtle as you wrote him. Very impressive.

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