but my writing skills aren’t up to it. I really need a lot more practice. I beg to differ. You're a wonderful writer, and this is an amazing first piece of work. And as your first, it means you've got nothing to do but improve, right?
It wasn't supposed to be all in italics. Maybe you forgot to close one of your tags? Whatever you wanted in italics should have [i] before it and [/i] after it (just replace [ and ] with < and >). If you don't use the [/i] at the end, the italics will keep on going.
An AU with John and Rodney as cyborgs could be kind of interesting The first thing that came to mind was that they'll now need a mechanic as well as a doctor when they get busted up off world. Can't you just picture Radek cursing fate as he tries to piece Rodney's arm back together?
If you do end up going further and you'd like someone to give it a look over, I'd be happy to.
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It wasn't supposed to be all in italics. Maybe you forgot to close one of your tags? Whatever you wanted in italics should have [i] before it and [/i] after it (just replace [ and ] with < and >). If you don't use the [/i] at the end, the italics will keep on going.
An AU with John and Rodney as cyborgs could be kind of interesting The first thing that came to mind was that they'll now need a mechanic as well as a doctor when they get busted up off world. Can't you just picture Radek cursing fate as he tries to piece Rodney's arm back together?
If you do end up going further and you'd like someone to give it a look over, I'd be happy to.