ext_140691 ([identity profile] duonoaikouka.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic 2012-09-12 12:27 am (UTC)

Very creepy and original. As others have noted, I love how you've characterized everyone in this unique situation. They're all very believable from canon in a situation that I would love to have seen acted out. Especially loved how Rodney was clinging to his science and rationale to try and explain these "ghosts" and Ronon's constant fighting. I also really enjoyed the eerie details you provided like the green cast on Ronon's face, like a corpse, and Rodney's "skeletal" fingers. They added to the atmosphere tremendously. Then there was the melancholy ending of the team protecting each other, even in death/ in the future. Just lovely. Thanks for sharing this wonderful horror, team-y, and characterizing fic.

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