How cool is it that you're writing SGA now?! I really enjoyed this.
Here -- John snapped back to reality like a rubber band launched across a room. and here -- A light, hollow feeling assaulted him, as though he’d just been cored like an apple. -- beautiful descriptions!
“Yeah,” John gasped, levering himself up and settling over Rodney’s shaking body, “me neither.”
Yeah, I loved that.
“You didn’t just want anybody to touch you like that. You wanted me to touch you like that.” I wanted about three more pages of this! Poor terrified Rodney. So sexy.
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Here -- John snapped back to reality like a rubber band launched across a room. and here -- A light, hollow feeling assaulted him, as though he’d just been cored like an apple. -- beautiful descriptions!
“Yeah,” John gasped, levering himself up and settling over Rodney’s shaking body, “me neither.”
Yeah, I loved that.
“You didn’t just want anybody to touch you like that. You wanted me to touch you like that.” I wanted about three more pages of this! Poor terrified Rodney. So sexy.