ext_1666 ([identity profile] mz-bstone.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic2006-01-30 08:29 pm

Document Challenge: Ever After by Brighid

Challenge: Document Challenge
Title: Ever After
Spoilers: None
Rating: G but not gen. *g*
Author: Brighid
Summary: Uh. Nope.



Ever After

"I really, really hate you," John hissed at Rodney, not for the first time and certainly not for the last time. "I would have thought that by now we'd be finished with the crazy, alien bonding rituals."

Rodney turned his head only a fraction. "Shut up and smile at the marriage commissioner, John."

John smiled tightly at the little white-haired lady in the blue robe standing just a few feet across their backyard under a little white awning that Rodney's nieces had spent the morning festooning with far too many streamers. And then he felt Rodney's fingertips, cool and steady, reach out and caress his palm.

"I don't really hate you," John said finally. "I just dislike you a lot."

"The feeling's mutual. Shall we?" Rodney said.

"Yeah," John sighed. "Why the hell not?"

*0*




*0*

And they lived ... well, like most people do, but with more aliens and a much shorter refractory period for men their age.

And they loved each other a whole lot.

*0*

Brighid 2006
ext_1890: (SGA Snow White)

[identity profile] svmadelyn.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
*sappy sigh* Very sweet. *g*

[identity profile] pollitt.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
B, I love you something wicked. This was beautiful :)


The end was perfect *g*

[identity profile] girlinthetrilby.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 04:49 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww!

*floves*

[identity profile] fatuorum.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 04:49 am (UTC)(link)
This is so sweet! I can't stop staring at the form *g*

[identity profile] twisted-vergule.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 04:51 am (UTC)(link)
Oh! I was just waiting for a marriage one.
And this is delightful, sweet without being too sappy. :)

[identity profile] mercuriosity.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 04:58 am (UTC)(link)
with more aliens and a much shorter refractory period for men their age.

BWAHAHAHA. And also, Eeeeee. *g*
ext_2117: (A thousand dancing hamsters)

[identity profile] rokeon.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 04:58 am (UTC)(link)
I read 'nieces,' got confused, and then took an embarrassingly long time to figure out the crazy aliens' home planet.

Canadians made them do it!!!

Neat.

[identity profile] teaphile.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 05:00 am (UTC)(link)
Wait... do you have Rodney born in Kitchener? Woo-hoo!

Damn those alien Canadians!

ever after

[identity profile] laceymcbain.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 05:08 am (UTC)(link)
Happily ever after in Canada. *sigh* I like that you called marriage an alien bonding ritual - it really really is.

[identity profile] shoemaster.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 05:16 am (UTC)(link)
Alien bonding rituals. Heeee. I am so amused by the word play.

Also, my inner font whore adores Rodney's handwriting.

[identity profile] spike21.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 05:17 am (UTC)(link)
yeah! *g*

[identity profile] adannu.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 05:18 am (UTC)(link)
HEE. *reads form again* Hee!

[identity profile] jcase.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 05:19 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yay! A treat before bed!

[identity profile] dizzycadence.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 06:28 am (UTC)(link)
Bickering right through their wedding day. XD ♥ So much love.

[identity profile] chocmarsh.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 07:16 am (UTC)(link)
Aww... This is very sweet.

[identity profile] jeddy83.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 07:53 am (UTC)(link)
Hee, cute.

[identity profile] larauwen.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 08:42 am (UTC)(link)
and a much shorter refractory period for men their age.

Hee

[identity profile] sjkasabi.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 11:14 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww.....

[identity profile] sffan.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 11:47 am (UTC)(link)
*giggle*

Very sweet.

[identity profile] umbo.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, yay!

[identity profile] panisdead.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 02:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Refractory period. Heh.

:)

[identity profile] serialkarma.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww! Also, heeee.
ext_39418: photo taken by Patricia (windchimewalker) (Default)

[identity profile] lovessong.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 03:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Very cute!

I'm curious, why Kitchener for Rodney's birthplace? (I have people in Kitchener, so I feel a connection to it.)
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[identity profile] cathexys.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
and a much shorter refractory period for men their age LOL

very, very nice :-) thank you!!!

[identity profile] ceitie.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome, as always. :)

[identity profile] troyswann.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
And they lived ... well, like most people do, but with more aliens and a much shorter refractory period for men their age.

Marry me.

C'moooooon. It's legal in this province! (for now)

:)

[identity profile] teand.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 06:24 pm (UTC)(link)
And they loved each other a whole lot.

Awwwwww.

Reminds of my wedding day..
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[identity profile] springwoof.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 08:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Perfect! Loved: "I don't really hate you," John said finally. "I just dislike you a lot." ::grins::

wags, springwoof
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[personal profile] paranoidangel 2006-01-31 09:30 pm (UTC)(link)
That's funny. Although proves I should really read description cos I had no idea what was going on until I read the comments.

[identity profile] haphazardmethod.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 09:56 pm (UTC)(link)
"I would have thought that by now we'd be finished with the crazy, alien bonding rituals."

So cute. *g*
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[identity profile] cereta.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 11:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwww.

[identity profile] jenlev.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 11:46 pm (UTC)(link)
hee! ""Shut up and smile at the marriage commissioner, John."

wonderful and delightful. :)

[identity profile] mecurtin.livejournal.com 2006-02-01 12:17 am (UTC)(link)
Yes. This is totally true.

Except: Rodney's middle name is "Ingram", we read it off the framed documents on his bedroom wall.

[identity profile] kajikia.livejournal.com 2006-02-01 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
Tiny and sweet and perfect. I liked the detail of Sheppard being born in Germany--a whole lot of backstory in those two words.

[identity profile] j00j.livejournal.com 2006-02-01 04:41 am (UTC)(link)
Awww!

"And they lived ... well, like most people do, but with more aliens and a much shorter refractory period for men their age."
heheh.

*contemplates all the intriguing little details, like Sheppard being born in Germany*

[identity profile] sgatlantislight.livejournal.com 2006-02-01 04:49 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this was cool. I loved John's take on marriage being an alien bonding ritual. Too funny.