ext_993 ([identity profile] cesperanza.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic2006-03-01 11:50 pm

MVP by Speranza

Title: MVP (74k)
Author: Speranza
Pairing: Sheppard/McKay
Postcard: here
Summary: "All right, all right, nothing to see here," he heard Sheppard say. "You've seen one giant snake, you've seen 'em all."

[identity profile] raveninthewind.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 06:00 am (UTC)(link)
This was exactly what I needed to read tonight. It was serious, but satisfied my fannish soul, and it was angsty, but not depressing, and it was sexy and loving without being too happy/schmoopy/romantic for me at the moment.

Thank you.

I especially liked the way you used the review comments again at the end. A deft way of bringing the catalyzing event back into the story and into the crisis of their relationship.