MVP by Speranza

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Title: MVP (74k)
Author: Speranza
Pairing: Sheppard/McKay
Postcard: here
Summary: "All right, all right, nothing to see here," he heard Sheppard say. "You've seen one giant snake, you've seen 'em all."

Comments

[scribewraith.livejournal.com]

I really love the way you've used a mix of styles in this and the mix of missions and the way they build their relationship through everyday incidents.

This was the bit that really made it for me:
He was exhausted, and knew he ought to just go to bed, but John would be coming; John always came to him after missions, as reliably as a cat scratching at the door. For a guy who supposedly couldn't form relationships, John was as predictable as clockwork, and Rodney found himself wondering if John's "weak family ties" were entirely his fault.

thank you!

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

You're welcome! and nindulgence noted that Rodney loves cats--with their fierce indepence and their nine lives. *g*