MVP by Speranza

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Title: MVP (74k)
Author: Speranza
Pairing: Sheppard/McKay
Postcard: here
Summary: "All right, all right, nothing to see here," he heard Sheppard say. "You've seen one giant snake, you've seen 'em all."

Comments

[marokura.livejournal.com]

I am way too not-awake to be leaving coherent feedback, but I'm glad writing fanfic makes you happy as reading yours makes me happy. Yay, happy. ^__^

Your John and Rodney, your dialogue, you clever turns of phrase - very much with the happy making, oh, yes.

[marokura.livejournal.com]

Oh! And P.S.! The structure and pacing of your stories is always such - just a pleasure, they're invisible but most definitely there. There's some analogy that would fit this perfectly and of course I'm too zonked to think of it. Anyway, yes, your structure is amazing (especially as I could teach a class on it but never manage to work a plot or even a reasonable facsimile into my own writing).