ext_1675 ([identity profile] laceymcbain.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic2006-05-23 03:29 pm

Lost in Waiting by Lacey McBain, NC-17 [Virgin]

Title: Lost in Waiting
Author: Lacey McBain
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~14,800 (I know!!)
Timeline: Set vaguely in the middle of S2 - definitely post-Runner, but with references to S1.
Summary: "You can’t have it both ways, Colonel. If you haven’t had any relationships, either you’re having the occasional one-night stand or you’re not having sex at all.”
Disclaimer: SGA doesn't belong to me. But you already knew that.
Author Notes:: [livejournal.com profile] torakowalski said she'd really like to see a realistic Virgin!John fic, and I got to thinking about it and couldn't stop. I tried my very best. This is for her.

On my webpage because it was too big for one post. Oops.

Lost in Waiting

Feedback makes me happy - multiple times. *G*

ETA: A huge thank you to everyone for reading and commenting. This is the most response I've ever had on a fic, and it's overwhelming in the best possible way. I usually respond to all comments, but I don't think I'll be able to this time, although I'll try to get to as many as possible. Thank you so much. ~Lacey

[identity profile] trinityofone.livejournal.com 2006-05-23 10:28 pm (UTC)(link)
This is so, so good. You made it a totally realistic Explanation of John, and my heart ached for him--and rejoiced for him, too. Also, I loved Rodney being gentle and yet totally Rodney-like. Wonderful.

I should also say: there should be more virgin!John fics. The day the number of virgin!John fics in fandom matches the number of Rodney ones, I will be exceedingly happy. So, thank you for contributing to that. *g*

[identity profile] lonespark.livejournal.com 2006-05-25 02:46 am (UTC)(link)
Well, especially if they're anything like this.