Pure Bodies and Clean Hearts by Speranza (Virgin Challenge)

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Title: Pure Bodies and Clean Hearts (26k)
Author: Speranza
Pairing: McShep
Summary: John gets a do-over.

Thanks to shalott, giddy, and res for beta beyond the call of duty.

Comments

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Thank you; in a way, that rapids section came out almost too well, and nearly tanked the rest of the story, which is necessarily quieter. *g* But I think it's the natural context for the sex scene, and I really did want to make all four of them virgins, even if one was a retrofit. *g*