Pure Bodies and Clean Hearts by Speranza (Virgin Challenge)

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Title: Pure Bodies and Clean Hearts (26k)
Author: Speranza
Pairing: McShep
Summary: John gets a do-over.

Thanks to shalott, giddy, and res for beta beyond the call of duty.

Comments

[mutecornett.livejournal.com]

D'oh, I meant physically erase his prior sexual experiences to make him a virgin. See, not making sense. :) I mostly like that you made it about John being emotionally a virgin, I guess, rather than *physically* one--I mean, it sounds weirdly simple when I put it that way but it's more complex in a way I can't really figure out. Um. I just really liked it.