ext_993 ([identity profile] cesperanza.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic2006-06-01 01:27 pm

Pure Bodies and Clean Hearts by Speranza (Virgin Challenge)

Title: Pure Bodies and Clean Hearts (26k)
Author: Speranza
Pairing: McShep
Summary: John gets a do-over.

Thanks to shalott, giddy, and res for beta beyond the call of duty.

(Anonymous) 2006-11-20 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
Certainly one of the more painful rituals John's been through! I liked his thoughts and feelings afterwards, how he was almost drunk on the newness of everything. I felt bad for Rodney's uncomfortableness whilst discussing his virgin state, so I was glad that he quickly got over that when John followed him back to the tent. Very hot, even more so because of the real feelings involved.

Laura.