Unbroken by Khriskin [Dark Side Challenge]

[khriskin]

TITLE: Unbroken
FANDOM: Stargate Atlantis
LENGTH/RATING: 100 words, PG-13, Gen
SUMMARY: When you ask for help, be careful who you ask. (Semi-Evil!Atlantis... again. *sighs* I blame my Muse)

It killed them, again and again. Sometimes fast, sometimes slow. Sometimes at the claws of an enemy, sometimes at the hands of a friend. It made them choose, over and over, soul-wrenching choices that killed one to save the many; to save another; to save themselves. And in the end, when they were sobbing and broken, it dropped them.

Rodney was the last, cocooned in pulsing fields of blue and amber, fighting through the choices, fighting and refusing to be broken. And when she let him go, Atlantis marked him with her sigil. Guinevere had her Lancelot, Atlantis had McKay.


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Comments

[rl4sb4eva.livejournal.com]

I like this, it's got potential.
She does make them shoose, and i could see where you were coming from!
Rl
x x x

[khriskin]

I'm glad someone liked it! ^_^;;

I figured Atlantis isn't a stupid city, she'd test them to make sure the person she picked as her avatar was going to make the right choices, even if they weren't good choices.

[rl4sb4eva.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I think that's the question though, between good and right choices.
And no way is Atlantis stupid, I mean she was built by the ancients they're going to have built certain things into her.