garnet-words.livejournal.com ([identity profile] garnet-words.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic2006-08-02 06:20 pm

Hive Minds by garnet_words

Title: Hive Minds
Author: garnet_words
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: Rising, I suppose.
Summary: He won't let it happen again.



John slowed and stopped at the edge of the forest. Teyla grabbed his arm insistently, but he'd already tuned her out.

He wasn't prepared for the hate to hit him as hard as it did. It drove him to his knees, but he caught it, grabbed onto the alien's mind and the other two quickly followed. Hive minds; he couldn't have asked for more.

He could feel blood dripping down his face but he only lashed out harder. This wasn't going to be like Afghanistan. No hesitation.

He felt them die, burned alive as the ships dove into the ground.
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[identity profile] alizarin-nyc.livejournal.com 2006-08-03 09:42 am (UTC)(link)
Fantastic.
ext_108: Jules from Psych saying "You guys are thinking about cupcakes, aren't you?" (atlantis: john gritty and worn)

[identity profile] liviapenn.livejournal.com 2006-08-03 03:38 pm (UTC)(link)

*Awesome*.

[identity profile] jcase.livejournal.com 2006-08-03 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow. I have shivers!

[identity profile] hajimebassaidai.livejournal.com 2010-05-19 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
That is...rather scary and obviously has a whole massive backstory to it.

It's a lot more effective sitting there without it though.