ext_1431 ([identity profile] teand.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic2006-08-14 10:15 pm

Look Up In the Sky by teand (Superpower Challenge)

Title:  Look Up In the Sky
Author: teand
Rating: G; Gen
Word Count: 1,230
Summary:  Perception is everything.

LOOK UP IN THE SKY

 

 

"You see, in my business sometimes it's important not to let inconvenient facts get in the way of the greater truth.  And the truth is, you should remain here..."  He met Dr. Weir's eyes and held her gaze with his.  "...in charge of this expedition."  Then, as she realized what that meant, he smiled.

 

He could see that even through her relief, she was smart enough to know what the smile meant and when he added, "For the moment." she only nodded.  In his business, approval was fluid and they didn't give absolutes.  Dr. Weir would do a better job if she had one less reason to keep looking over her shoulder but he couldn't give her that.  Couldn't make her job any easier.

 

And what a job...

 

He walked over the door of her office and looked out over the gate room.  Noted the pairs of Marines standing ready, a group of scientists arguing as they walked, recognized three people who'd been with him on the Daedalus, new faces to replace those who hadn't survived one of the countless crises this mission had faced from the beginning. 

 

"A lot to ask of normal, everyday men and women," he murmured.

 

"Pardon?"

 

He turned to find Dr. Weir at his shoulder.  "I was just thinking ..." A gesture out at the infinite ways things could go wrong in Pegasus.  "...that this mission could use a few supermen."

 

She stared at him for a long moment – her diplomat's face on, he couldn't tell what she was thinking – then she said, "Mr. Woolsey, walk with me."  and left the room, giving him no choice but to follow.

 

Rolling his eyes as he realized he should have kept his mouth shut.  "I know what you're going to say, Dr. Weir." 

 

She flashed a Mona Lisa smile at him as he caught up.  "No, I don't think you do."

 

"I read the reports and..."

 

Her raised hand cut him off and held him motionless on the balcony. 

 

"Do you know how much blood has been spilled in this city, Mr. Woolsey?  And I mean literally spilled.  Spilled, splashed, splattered..."  Her mouth twisted.  "Sorry."

 

"Dr. Weir..."

 

She ignored him.  "The fierce looking young woman standing by the far side of the gate is Dr. Connie Franklin.  She's a biologist but like everyone here she wears a couple of hats and doubles up on tech support.   After the Wraith attack, after the clean-up crews had taken buckets and mops and sponges and rubber gloves to stains that might have been all that was left of their friends, Dr. Franklin came into the control room and quietly took one of the consoles apart."

 

"Yes, but..."

 

"Dr. Rankin had taken a piece of shrapnel..."  Weir continued quietly.  "...and the spray of blood went... well, everywhere.  The clean up crew got rid of the mess you could see but...  No one told Dr. Franklin to take the console apart.  Do you know what she said when I asked her why?  Why with so many major repairs needing done, with so much damage and so much blood all over the city, she thought of that?"  Dr. Weir didn't give him time to answer.  "She said, she figured the control room staff had enough on their plates without being reminded of their mortality every time a key stuck."

 

"Well, that's..."

 

"Not all."  She started walking again and frowning slightly, Woolsey matched her step.  Halfway down one of the long corridors, she paused and smiled at a passing Marine.  "Lieutenant Rodriguez."

 

"Ma'am."  His smile was warming.

 

"This is Mr. Woolsey."

 

Woolsey waited for the thinly veiled hostility.  His reason for being in Atlantis was top secret so, of course, everyone knew it.   

 

Rodriquez's gaze was measuring but non-judgmental.  "Pleased to meet you, sir."

 

"Lieutenant Rodriquez," Dr. Weir said as they continued walking, "is a genuinely nice man.  And he has remained a nice man regardless of what the Pegasus Galaxy has thrown at him."

 

They stopped walking just inside the door to the mess.

 

Weir nodded at the large, middle-aged woman behind the steam line.  "Technical Sergeant Halton, our cook."

 

"Dr.  Rosen," Woolsey began.

 

"Is a dietician," Weir finished.  "Technical Sergeant Halton has taken Dr. Rosen's reports and a thousand and one strange foodstuffs and kept us fed.  She's used fruits and vegetables from half a dozen different worlds, parts of animals I don't even want to think about, and created meals that not only met all our nutritional needs but tasted..."

 

"Good?"  Woolsey offered, sarcastically.

 

Weir smiled.  "Not always but surprisingly often.  In the year before the Daedalus arrived, she baked forty-two birthday cakes.  The last fourteen of them after we ran out of ingredients we'd brought with us."

 

"And you don't think birthday cakes are..."

 

"...a reminder that celebrating milestones together is one of the things that makes us human?  Yes, I do."

 

He thought it safest to stay silent on the way to the infirmary.

 

"Garret Harper."  Weir nodded toward the large man with shoulders like a linebacker bending over a bed against the far wall.  "He's one of the two original nurse/practitioners Dr. Beckett brought with him.  The infirmary has a full staff now but in the beginning...  Have you ever been in hospital, Mr. Woolsey?  As a patient?"

 

He blinked.  "No.  I haven't."

 

"I have.  And let me tell you that if I had to choose between a good nurse and a brilliant doctor, I'd take a good nurse every time.  Someone who sees a person, not a patient.  Someone who understands firmness does not mean tyranny.  Someone who hears what you're saying even when the pain is twisting your words."

 

"Someone like Garret Harper."

 

She nodded in approval and he had to fight an involuntary urge to preen.  "You're catching on, Mr. Woolsey."

 

They walked side by side back to the Gateroom.  "When you read the reports, you read about Colonel Sheppard blowing up a Wraith ship or taking out the Genii but you don't read about the tech who got those hard to clean stains out of his uniform."

 

Brows up, he glanced sideways and found her smiling at him.  He couldn't keep himself from smiling back.

 

"You read about Dr. Zelenka or Dr. McKay up for seventy-two hours and finally pulling the answer out of the ether that saves the city once again but you don't read about the guy who kept refilling their coffee mugs and ran their errands and took their abuse.  You read about the amazing advances Dr. Beckett has made in gene therapy but you don't read about the nurse who emptied the bedpans."

 

They were back in the Gateroom, and a Marine he didn't know was holding out his briefcase.  He took it, nodded his thanks, and turned to find himself caught in a measuring gaze.

 

"Do you understand what I'm telling you, Mr. Woolsey?"

 

"You're telling me that the normal, everyday men and women in Atlantis can handle the job just fine."

 

"No.  I'm telling you that this mission has a superman for every occasion."  Half turning, she raised her voice enough to be heard in the control room.  "Dial Earth!" 

 

He waited until the event horizon had engaged and there was a chance of being heard before asking, "And your superpower, Dr. Weir?"

 

This last smile was dazzling.  "Seeing theirs."

 

 

havocthecat: the lady of shalott (lizzie close-up)

[personal profile] havocthecat 2006-08-16 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
This is a nice slice of life, showing how Elizabeth values everyone under her command, and their contributions to Atlantis. It's something we wouldn't get on the show (but we could, as this is a very well-done, in-character piece), and so it's wonderful to see it in fic.

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[personal profile] khriskin 2006-08-17 02:01 am (UTC)(link)
I really liked this one. ^_^ It's hard to remember sometimes that there are more people on Atlantis than the ones shown onscreen, and it speaks volumes about Elizabeth that she'd know each and every one by name and by 'talent'. *happy purrs* Thanks for writing!!

[identity profile] ileliberte.livejournal.com 2006-08-17 03:52 pm (UTC)(link)
That was wonderful. A change from the usual and quite lovely. Thank you for sharing.

[identity profile] mariko-neko.livejournal.com 2006-12-13 01:18 am (UTC)(link)
I have such love for this story. Weir is perfectly herself and so wonderful telling Woolsey how things are and *incoherent handflails of descriptive glee*

[identity profile] claw789.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
Nice piece.

[identity profile] jadesfire.livejournal.com 2007-11-06 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is perfect. I love the birthday reference, because I can just see that as being something important to them. SGA does supporting characters better than a lot of shows, but its stories like this that really bring them to love. Lovely.

Much enjoyed, thanks.

[identity profile] merrycontrary.livejournal.com 2007-11-06 06:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! I loved this so much!

[identity profile] sulien.livejournal.com 2007-11-07 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
*stands and raises coffee cup high* Here's to you! I absolutely loved your characterization of Elizabeth Weir, it is dead on the money. Even more so, thank you for such a wonderful story recognizing all of those unsung people who make all of our lives better and safer. They receive entirely too little recognition.

[identity profile] sulien.livejournal.com 2007-11-07 04:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Also, I have to say that I absofreakinglutely love your icon? It really saddens me that Torri Higginson and Dr. Weir were booted from the show because the character was so underutilized and often faded into the background the way the character was written in the series. I love my show, but sometimes the writers and producers thereof really get on my last nerve. /rant Erm, sorry.
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[personal profile] sholio 2007-11-12 12:12 am (UTC)(link)
Great story! This was just rec'd at stargategenrec and I'm really glad, because I'd missed it the first time around and it was a very nice peek at the behind-the- scenes operations of Atlantis. I really enjoyed it. :)

[identity profile] wildcat88.livejournal.com 2007-11-12 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Read this from the rec at [livejournal.com profile] stargategenrec. LOVED this look at the behind the scenes people. I also adore Weir knowing them by name and the little things they do (like taking apart the console) to keep the city running.
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[personal profile] aelfgyfu_mead 2007-12-26 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice. Woolsey and Weir themselves haven't been the most fully-fleshed out characters, and to take them and use them to give us a glimpse people we never get to see--very well-done!

[identity profile] redbyrd-sgfic.livejournal.com 2007-12-26 10:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, marvelous! This is one of the things that I love to see in fanfic, a fic that shows us it isn't just the main characters with a bunch of paper cutouts surrounding them to get blownup or provide a plot point. All the other folks on Atlantis are real people too, and you've captured that beautifully- and with a nicely in-character Elizabeth, who truly would appreciate the small things as well as the great. Very well done!

[identity profile] rosewildeirish.livejournal.com 2007-12-26 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
You know, I read this and liked it when it was first posted, but I must've been time pressed because I don't see any feedback from me. Sorry! Glad for the rec that led me back. :)

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[identity profile] maxinemayer.livejournal.com 2007-12-27 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely - you have me in tears! And it's so true! Thank you for sharing! Love, max

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[identity profile] maxinemayer.livejournal.com 2007-12-27 03:52 am (UTC)(link)
FYI, this just showed up at stargateficrec (recced by thady) tonight! I just joined LJ in November, so your story is new to me!

Also, I love your Elizabeth "smarter than I'm written" icon! And the photo of Torri is beautiful.

Love, max

[identity profile] kuonji14.livejournal.com 2007-12-29 09:24 am (UTC)(link)
This is beautiful! How could I have missed this? The setup of taking Woolsey for a tour is perfect, and the last line is superb. Short and sweet, packs a lot of feeling and background into a short piece. Thanks!

[identity profile] sor-bet.livejournal.com 2008-04-08 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
Really nice take on the challenge theme, and totally in-character for Elizabeth (and Woolsey, too). I can totally hear her speaking, see her pointing out each of the people she's talking about. Well done.

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