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wolfshark ([personal profile] wolfshark) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic2006-11-29 08:28 am

Punk, PG-13, by wolfshark

Title: Punk
Word Count: 664
Rating: PG13
Summary: It didn't take long for John to realize that Rodney wouldn't be naked with him unless the lights were out.



It didn't take long for John to realize that Rodney wouldn't be naked with him unless the lights were out.

Blowjobs up against a wall, while both of them were both still mostly dressed? Fine. Frantic make out sessions where neither of them got out of their clothes? Fine.

But as soon as the clothes started to come off, Rodney would turn the lights down, and before he finished, the lights would be out.

At first, John chalked it up to Rodney feeling self conscious about his body. John didn't see any point to it, but he could kind of see where Rodney was coming from. He wasn't in bad shape, but next to John, with his fast metabolism, he could conceivably feel less than good. So John tried to whisper reassurance in his ear, tell him how very hot John found him.

But it didn't seem to make any difference. The lights still went out, and he was left wondering what Rodney was hiding.

Tonight was no different, and John was working his way down Rodney's body by touch, tasting and licking him all over. As he licked a long path over one of Rodney's hips, his hands slid underneath him and slowly up his spine, only to stop because Rodney tensed up.

"Rodney?"

"It's nothing. Just please..." Rodney's hands tangled in his hair, pushing him towards his dick, but John resisted.

"Tell me what I did wrong, Rodney." John's hands stroked again over that spot, pressing deeper, wondering if maybe Rodney had a knot or something there, but he couldn't feel anything. But Rodney was getting more tense, not less.

Finally, with a huff, Rodney said, "You're not going to leave this alone, are you?"

"No, I'm not. And since you've as good as said that there is something wrong, you might as well tell me."

Rodney sighed. "If you're not going to leave it alone, I might as well show you. But you have to promise not to laugh."

"I won't laugh. I promise," John said. Finally, he was going to figure out why Rodney was so adamant about not showing his back. Rodney shoved at his shoulder, and John pulled back enough to give Rodney some space.

Slowly, the lights came up. Only partly, but it was still enough for John to see Rodney clearly. He'd been right. From the front, Rodney looked perfectly normal. "Well?"

Giving another sigh, Rodney slowly turned over. There, on the small of his back, "Is that a fairy?!"

"I told you you were gonna laugh!" Rodney buried his face in the pillow, but it didn't hide the blush that crept over his shoulders and down his back.

John ran a finger over the fairy. She was dressed in tattered black, and the look on her face was one of complete disdain. She looked nothing like any fairy John had ever seen.

"I think it's..." he started.

"What? Stupid? Girly? Just go ahead and spit it out."

It was John's turn to sigh. "I was going to say that it was cool. Very cool."

Rodney looked back over his shoulder at John. "Really?"

"Really. So how did you come to have a punk fairy tattooed on your back, anyway?"

Rodney turned back over, and John took the opportunity to lie down next to him, his head pillowed on Rodney's shoulder. "I told you I was a punk when I was a kid."

"Yeah, but I thought you meant you were, you know, a bratty kid. Not an actual punk."

"I'll have to see if Jeannie has any pictures from then. I was an actual punk. And I thought it looked neat. Then I outgrew my punk phase and just never got around to having it removed. It wasn't exactly a priority for me. You sure you don't want to laugh?"

"I'm sure. Besides, it's appropriate."

Rodney looked over at John, puzzled. "What?"

"You'll always be a fairy to me."

Rodney hit him with a pillow.

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2006-11-29 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
heeee!!! Highly cute!

[identity profile] crownglass39.livejournal.com 2006-11-29 02:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I can see Rodney having a snarky fairy tattoo. Probably goes with the spiked leather cuffs he used to wear.
ext_90: crop of 'The Morning Star' by Alphonse Mucha; woman in flowing gown with hand to forehead, painted in greens and golds (Bright!McShep)

[identity profile] gblvr.livejournal.com 2006-11-29 02:28 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL. Rodney has a fairy! I think the only thing funnier would be Ronon with a girly tattoo....

[identity profile] coreopsis.livejournal.com 2006-11-29 03:14 pm (UTC)(link)
ahahaha My love for John knows no bounds.
fairestcat: Dreadful the cat (Rodney Queen Bitch 1)

[personal profile] fairestcat 2006-11-29 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
HEEE.

I love John's reaction to.
ext_948: (... typical couple)

[identity profile] from-the-corner.livejournal.com 2006-11-29 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
He, he - good one!
ext_11979: (McShep stand by Brandinsbabe)

[identity profile] suki-blue.livejournal.com 2006-11-29 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Punk!Rodney? There's an image. :oD

Great stuff. And Bless John for being all reassuring and John-like.

[identity profile] bibliokat.livejournal.com 2006-11-29 05:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, I love the idea of punk!Rodney;)

[identity profile] ras-elased.livejournal.com 2006-11-30 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, cute and funny! *g*

[identity profile] seratonation.livejournal.com 2006-11-30 04:45 am (UTC)(link)
lol, thats really cute, a punk fairy would suit Rodney and his punk phase (yeah we all saw the pictures) :D
ext_979: (cute)

[identity profile] saba1789.livejournal.com 2006-11-30 01:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, cute! Thanks for writing and sharing this :-) .
ext_2382: (shepseduction)

[identity profile] tipsywitch.livejournal.com 2006-11-30 08:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Hail punk fairys! and the two fairest of them all....

[identity profile] akacat.livejournal.com 2006-11-30 08:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll bet that is a cool looking tattoo! And those last two lines are excellently funny. *g*
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libitina: Wei Yingluo from Story of Yanxi Palace in full fancy costume holding a gaiwan and sipping tea (Default)

[personal profile] libitina 2006-12-01 09:09 am (UTC)(link)
An SGA retelling of Cupid and Psyche!

[identity profile] paradise-city.livejournal.com 2006-12-03 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
That was very cute, and quite believable. I've shied away from this challenge because it seems a difficult one to work into characterization, but this was great. :)

[identity profile] ellex42.livejournal.com 2006-12-03 05:46 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my...cute and funny.

[identity profile] saphanibaal.livejournal.com 2006-12-07 05:19 am (UTC)(link)
There ought to be something more comprehensive to say than "This was great. I loved it," but in its absence:

This was great. I loved it.

[identity profile] cryptocat.livejournal.com 2006-12-07 05:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Image

I also have an image of just the fairy if you want it

[identity profile] sublomie.livejournal.com 2006-12-10 12:24 am (UTC)(link)
Excellent fic. You know I love Punk!Rodney as a kid, but I don't think he out grew it nearly as much as he'd like to. It's all in the attitude. (In short, you win.)