ext_24328 ([identity profile] jennytork.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic2008-04-03 01:43 pm

Sure Enough... (Family Challenge)

Title: Sure Enough....
Author:[livejournal.com profile] jennytork
Rating: G
Summary: So Rodney's a mutant. What about Jeannie?
Warnings: Set in my Gifts AU




It hit Rodney after he received the message back from Peter Tork and after John's ability came on line. "Hey...John?"

"Hm?"

"I'm a mutant, right?"

John looked up from his mountain of paperwork. "I thought we'd already established this, Rodney."

Rodney waved a hand at him, barely avoiding knocking the dishes from their working lunch off John's desk. "I know, I know – But John ... If I'm a mutant...."

And John's eyes widened as he caught up with Rodney. "Jeannie."

"Yeah," he sighed.

"Only one way to find out."

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Two weeks later.

"Rodney, just write her. You'll worry yourself sick if you don't."

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

A week later.

"Rodney, c'mon! Stop asking me and just contact her!"

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Two weeks later.

"Just write the damn letter, already!"

Frustrated that his procrastination had irritated John -- again-- Rodney retreated to his quarters to sulk.

And to plan the letter.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

In the end, he told her like he'd told Peter. In a video letter. In code. Decoded, the message read:

"Jeannie, I've developed a mutation. I can make crystal out of air. Weird question –can you do anything?"

The video message in return was short and to the point. And also in code.

"Mer, I thought I was the only one. Mine manifested while I was dating Caleb. It's another reason I dropped out of academia."

Rodney felt his eyes prick with tears of shame at how he'd treated her.

But she continued, "I have to be away from people for long stretches of time or I feel like I'm going mad. Mer, I'm a low-level empath. Too many people and it hits me physically."

Then she dropped all code and looked squarely into the camera. "I have never stopped loving you, Mer. Never. Good luck. You're never alone."

And the screen went dark.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

John found the note on his desk the next day.

Sure enough. Empath. No wonder she isolated herself. Thanks, John. Now I know. --R

And John just grinned. "Lantea?" he whispered. "Be extra-nice to Rodney for awhile."

It will be as you wish, John.

John frowned, suddenly wondering if it had been such a good idea to let the sentient city eavesdrop when they'd watched The Princess Bride.

END

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[personal profile] leesa_perrie 2008-04-03 06:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice! I love the 'two weeks later', 'one week later' etc and John's growing frustration! That's just so Rodney when it comes to writing his sister, I'm sure.

Nice idea to give Jeannie empathy, and for that to push her away from people.

[identity profile] jx-walker.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 05:07 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow! Peter Tork of the Monkees? Does he have a gift?

Really, I have been enjoying this series. I like how you explained Jeannie's background of giving up her University learning for marriage. Well done. Please write more in this series. More of John and Rodney.

Thanks

[identity profile] jx-walker.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
I haven't read those, I will check them out. I've just seen the Atlantis ones.

Thanks.