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ext_1558 ([identity profile] lim.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic2006-08-25 11:19 pm

mission report by lim (mission report challenge)

Title: Mission Report
Characters: Teyla, Pegasus
Length: 141 words / 1 minute 49 seconds
Rating: G
Notes: Thanks to Ces for everything.
Er. I figured Teyla has an oral culture.

Mission Report [ 2.5mb mp3 ] Zipped.



I can sing this high mind rhyme
The day was long
The sky was fine
We spread our hands and our smiles wide
Our jewels reflected in their eyes

Ragged and thin they took us in
And washed our bodies from their water skins
We took their comfort and gave them toys
We kissed their girls
And beat their boys

Oh, ho, how can we go?
How can we travel with our cloak of woe?
How can we meddle in these hungry lives?
Bellies so full and our clear blue skies

Oh the hearth is cold and the wraith are blue
Ring of the ancestors sky is too

What's done is done
That war is won
And guilt is the indulgence of the favoured son
The day was long
The sky was fine
We spread our hands and our smiles wide


And I made a sort of vid to go with it:

video [ 16mb divX , 10mb .m4v , 57mb .mov ] Zipped.


Many thanks to Oxoniensis for hosting.

[identity profile] kaizoku.livejournal.com 2006-08-26 09:49 pm (UTC)(link)
I imagine this to be sung in the round, like a cycle? So it could be added to after every mission - a new verse, I mean.

Ah, cool! I like the idea that they might start keeping mission reports in song form, a kind of oral history - especially if they had to leave Atlantis for some reason. Hmm, I'd love to see some fic based on this...

[identity profile] triskellita.livejournal.com 2006-08-26 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
wow, this was awesome, both the song and the vid. you're brilliant.

[identity profile] miss-pryss.livejournal.com 2006-08-26 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, *pretty*.

[identity profile] yin-again.livejournal.com 2006-08-26 10:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Astonishing - the lyrics, the song, the arangement, the vid. Take a bow, you deserve it.

All of it was lovely.

[identity profile] windmiran.livejournal.com 2006-08-26 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I've seen Morris dancing before. Happily, Teyla looks so much more fluid and elemental to me than that video. It's just my fangirl brain saying - all of Teyla's people rock that hard! Unfortunately, Terry Pratchett has suceeded in making thing offensive!Morris dancing is only right when you're trying to defeat a bunch of psychotic elves. It would probably work on space vampires, too...
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[identity profile] zoniduck.livejournal.com 2006-08-26 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh! This is amazing work. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

[identity profile] das-kabinett.livejournal.com 2006-08-27 12:32 am (UTC)(link)
This is incredible; I absolutely adored this.

[identity profile] radiophonic.livejournal.com 2006-08-27 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
Really amazing. I'm amusing you used GarageBand? (I recognized the audio loop. Yes, I live a sad life.) I envy your ability to make something this wonderful in that program. &hearts

[identity profile] denyce.livejournal.com 2006-08-27 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, & Wow... stunned by the beauty, time & work you put into this. Thank you SO much for sharing; now I'm off to rec :-)

[identity profile] norah.livejournal.com 2006-08-27 02:11 am (UTC)(link)
AND IF YOU BOLD THEM THEY MAKE THINGS COME TRUE. *nods*

[identity profile] viciouswishes.livejournal.com 2006-08-27 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
I love the layering in the vid.

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