ext_993 ([identity profile] cesperanza.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_flashfic2007-12-14 11:21 am

The Te of John, by Speranza

Title: The Te of John (43k)
Author: Speranza
Pairing: McShep
Words: ~ 7000
Author's Note: Should be grading, so finishing old flashfics instead. For the Wordless challenge.
Excerpt: "Do you remember the Total Perspective Vortex?"

[identity profile] cupidsbow.livejournal.com 2007-12-14 05:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, yes. I loved it. I can't even begrudge it.

I especially love the dialogue. You have a really sharp ear for it, and so many of John's lines are perfect in this. I can hear him saying them as I read.

[identity profile] cupidsbow.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 12:20 am (UTC)(link)
I'm not a Vulcan; I don't pretend to be logical all the time. And your story, well, what can I say? It falls into the 2% of my psyche that is made up of a writhing mess of writerly delusion that I am a SPECIAL SNOWFLAKE, goddammit.

Also, you totally stole the idea from my brain BEFORE I EVEN THOUGHT IT UP. You're just that good. ;)