Four Post Secrets (Amnesty/Post Secret Challenge)

[speedgeek]

*waves* Flashfic virgin here. Please be gentle. ;)



Two are SG1 crossovers. :)

Comments

[psyko-kittie.livejournal.com]

Lovely secrets, though the first one has left me confused? :)

[diamond-raven.livejournal.com]

Oh, that last one is really a punch in the gut! I've never really thought about the fact that Teyla might actually resent John a bit for forcing her and her people to leave Athos.

I have to say that the first three confuse me a bit too. Maybe it's because I know next to nothing about SG-1. I'd really like to know who said the second one.

Structure wise, the third one is beautiful! I love the different layers and the writing really stands out and looks awesome!

[lunamazes.livejournal.com]

I don't catch the word of postcard 2, the colour is a little bit bind together. What's it?

I never get that why they don't go back....

[rinsbane.livejournal.com]

I love that last one. I've always wondered too if Teyla might not have a secret kernel of resentment toward them. Not that she'd act on it, but it would be only human. And it came out so pretty!

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

oooh, #2 is a big ouch.