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Date: 2008-01-01 05:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] psyko-kittie.livejournal.com
Lovely secrets, though the first one has left me confused? :)

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Date: 2008-01-01 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] psyko-kittie.livejournal.com
Okay. That makes a bit more sense now. :)

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Date: 2008-01-01 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diamond-raven.livejournal.com
Oh, that last one is really a punch in the gut! I've never really thought about the fact that Teyla might actually resent John a bit for forcing her and her people to leave Athos.

I have to say that the first three confuse me a bit too. Maybe it's because I know next to nothing about SG-1. I'd really like to know who said the second one.

Structure wise, the third one is beautiful! I love the different layers and the writing really stands out and looks awesome!

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Date: 2008-01-01 12:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lunamazes.livejournal.com
I don't catch the word of postcard 2, the colour is a little bit bind together. What's it?

I never get that why they don't go back....

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Date: 2008-01-01 01:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rinsbane.livejournal.com
I love that last one. I've always wondered too if Teyla might not have a secret kernel of resentment toward them. Not that she'd act on it, but it would be only human. And it came out so pretty!

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Date: 2008-01-01 05:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
oooh, #2 is a big ouch.

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