Oh, that last one is really a punch in the gut! I've never really thought about the fact that Teyla might actually resent John a bit for forcing her and her people to leave Athos.
I have to say that the first three confuse me a bit too. Maybe it's because I know next to nothing about SG-1. I'd really like to know who said the second one.
Structure wise, the third one is beautiful! I love the different layers and the writing really stands out and looks awesome!
I always figured Teyla's got to have a little resentment over losing her home and way of life.
Only the third one really connects to SG1 (first two actually relate to Rising). I had a crazy thought that Oma Desala (the Ancient who ascended Daniel twice) put the idea of Atlantis in his head knowing he wouldn't keep it to himself, before he unexpectedly went after Anubis and got kicked out of the glow club.
Second one is left up to your imagination as to who got stuck with the one night stand they never wanted to see again. ;)
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Date: 2008-01-01 05:59 am (UTC)I have to say that the first three confuse me a bit too. Maybe it's because I know next to nothing about SG-1. I'd really like to know who said the second one.
Structure wise, the third one is beautiful! I love the different layers and the writing really stands out and looks awesome!
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Date: 2008-01-01 06:20 am (UTC)I always figured Teyla's got to have a little resentment over losing her home and way of life.
Only the third one really connects to SG1 (first two actually relate to Rising). I had a crazy thought that Oma Desala (the Ancient who ascended Daniel twice) put the idea of Atlantis in his head knowing he wouldn't keep it to himself, before he unexpectedly went after Anubis and got kicked out of the glow club.
Second one is left up to your imagination as to who got stuck with the one night stand they never wanted to see again. ;)