Thank you for this; I really enjoyed it. I love seeing all the different dynamics between these two characters, and you took it in some directions I haven't seen before. And the way they're both trying so hard to make things work, after all the problems they've had to deal with in Atlantis... it's so difficult to watch people who care for each other screwing up, just because they can't seem to communicate, and you write it so well...
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Date: 2005-07-22 07:59 pm (UTC)I'll be looking out for your fic :)