Very nice! I have a soft spot for Carson being the giant mama's boy that he is, so this was perfect for me. I thought your first story was just fine -- everything you wrote said something, no wasted space, and the final thought seemed very in-character for him; I can see him being one of those people for whom *home* is a huge deal. Congratulations! The second story is always the hardest! *g*
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Date: 2005-08-16 05:12 pm (UTC)