Lovely, lovely fic. That scene in "Jaws" always makes me feel cold inside, and you do a wonderful job repeating the experience here, even though it's Ronon telling the story this time. Also, I like how you used that story to create character moments, some insight into Ronon's young, hard life and just how Rodney has no way to relate to it. Again, just a lovely, lovely fic.
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Date: 2005-12-21 04:23 pm (UTC)