I can see that hesitance to go too far; excess would be worse than too little, I think. Info dumping wrecks some otherwise brilliant stories.
Although Grand Sweeping Epics are righteous by me. I'd read one in this universe. But that's a big project for an already good little story.
Thoughts, hmm. You gave us John only through other POVs, which was perfect, or felt that way to me. But I feel like somehow I need to catch a glimpse inside him. Companion pieces work, but maybe just a clue picked up by Rodney. I don't know. Something clever I can't think of. *g*
Oh, and if you did ask me to beta, I'd probably say yes.
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Date: 2006-04-13 01:53 am (UTC)Although Grand Sweeping Epics are righteous by me.
I'd read one in this universe. But that's a big project for an already good little story.
Thoughts, hmm.
You gave us John only through other POVs, which was perfect, or felt that way to me. But I feel like somehow I need to catch a glimpse inside him. Companion pieces work, but maybe just a clue picked up by Rodney. I don't know. Something clever I can't think of. *g*
Oh, and if you did ask me to beta, I'd probably say yes.