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Very nice narrative, although I did notice a few spelling/wording issues. Specifically:

I will never be aloud to live and will never be aloud to breed with the Queen for fear I will pass on my aberration to the eggs.</>

I think aloud should be allowed in both instances in that sentence.

Other then that it was really great. Painted a very interesting picture. Will you be continuing this?

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Stargate Atlantis Flashfiction

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