Stargate Atlantis Flashfiction

Thank-you for feeding back, I'm glad you've gotten engaged in the story! In answer to the things about the world they're in, it is a world that I have lifted the basic idea of from the mockumentary 'CSA: Confederate States of America' as a sort of semi-crossover and so (a) and (b) derive from the canon of that (as a British person I am so with you on (b) though!). (c) and (d) relate (I think I have this right) to ways I've had Rodney's POV see them in this story, and (d) in particular is going to come up and surprise him in the sequel! I'm pleased you pointed that these things troubled you because the temptation is to just sketch in the background and it's better (for the reader and for 'artistic discipline' if such a pretentious term may be used for flashfic) if internal logic is preserved. If I were to do this again I would put more clarification into this story in this first part.
In relation to the other comments 'the ability not to kill Rodney'is just such a perfect description of why Rodney/Teyla is like 'OMG! HET OTP!' and I love it! Cheers for all the feedback x