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Date: 2007-10-02 02:50 am (UTC)
Great team fic, fitting each one in a prison of their own making, very scary. Each situation was perfectly matched to the person's own worst situation. The guilt that John carries was illustrated with the physical and emotional pain symbolized/experienced in the shed. You did a great job showing the angst and reacclimatization they all experienced coming back and adjusting to reality. I loved that they found the support and understanding they needed/craved from each other. The emotional turmoil was very well written. Your ending sentences were the perfect ending for this excellent story.
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