You know, I remember Downhill . . . the plants and the storm thing? Works really well here too, and you can definitely see the improvement in your writing since then. I really loved the team's interaction and speech patterns. Felt real, and amusing and touching and urgent all at once. And this plant was much creepier than the last one. Less messy, too. Congratulations on a job well done.
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Date: 2008-02-03 08:50 am (UTC)